What do you think of this Poem i wrote?

It is amazing, I like how you did from a different point of view than normal, it is an emotion wracking poem, I can tell how much of your self you pored into writing it, if you use that amount of pion on everything you do, you will do great things, When I first finished reading it, I was struck speechless, it is a wonderful poem, and written for a beautiful cause, Did it help you find closure for the loss of your friend? I hope so, sometimes writing is the only way I can express what i'm feeling when there are such powerful ones as that, bravo, it is beautifully written and beautifully put together